Thursday, May 24, 2012

Revised

So, you know the most recent poem that I posted? I revised it. I made it a lot better, so here it is:

If you had one wish what would it be? Would you wish for something you can hear, feel, or see? Would you wish for something you really need? Or would you just wish for a good book to read? If you could have one wish what would it be? Would you wish for you or would you wish for me? Would you wish to be right or for me to be wrong? Would you wish for life to be short or for it to be long? Would you wish for wings to fly? Or are you happy just looking at the sky? Would you wish to go far or stay where you are? If you had one wish who knows what it'd be, I just wish to always be me.

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